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常用高級句式

下面列出了讀后續(xù)寫中常用的句式結(jié)構(gòu)，倘若靈活、恰當(dāng)?shù)丶右赃\(yùn)用，文章一定會錦上添花。

句式1：句式分詞短語作狀語

Having slept so poorly, Lucy was not ready for the day at all Lucy.

沒有睡好覺，根本沒有準(zhǔn)備好迎接這一天。

句式2：形容詞(短語)作狀語

Excited and moved , he followed the sound and went out for help.

他又激動又感動,順著聲音出去求助。

句式3：with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)

The house caught fire last night, with nothing left init.

那座房子昨晚著火了，里面什么。

句式4：獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)

The boy rushed to the old man's house, his face covered with sweat.

男孩沖到那位老人的家，滿臉是汗。

句式5：強(qiáng)調(diào)句

It was the whole situation that made her very depressed and upset.

正是整個情況讓她感到非常沮喪和失望。

句式6：倒裝句

Cold and tired though we were, the kids' smiling faces cheered us up.

雖然我們又冷又累，但孩子們的笑臉使我們振奮起來。

句式7：虛擬語氣

Five feet to the right, he would have fallen down to the bottom of the hole.

往右五英尺，他就會掉到洞底。

高分萬能結(jié)尾句

助人結(jié)尾句

2. Sometimes, a small gesture of care will possibly melt people's loneliness.

有時候一個小小的關(guān)愛舉動也可能融化人們內(nèi)心的孤單。

3. Helping others to realize their dreams gave me more pleasure. 

幫助別人實(shí)現(xiàn)他們的夢想讓我感覺更快樂。

4. This kind act has a lasting infuence on me. I always give others a helping hand if possible, even so many years later.

這種善意的行為對我產(chǎn)生了持久的影響。即使多年以后,我也總是盡可能地幫助別人。

5. She felt warmth in the cold day, and believed there was kindness in every corner. 

她在寒冷的日子里感受到了溫暖,相信每個角落都有善意。

6.Only in this way could more and more people help each other in the future.

只有這樣，將來才能有越來越多的人互相幫助。

感動感悟結(jié)尾句

Whether rich or poor, we should be happy to do something for society. This is because giving is the source of happiness.

無論貧富，我們都應(yīng)該為社會做點(diǎn)什么。這是因?yàn)榻o予是幸福的源泉。

脫險結(jié)尾句

That unforgettable experience was carved into my heart and nothing would be able to erase it. It turns out that there's always a way out of any trouble as long as we never give up our hope.

那段難忘的經(jīng)歷刻在我的心里，沒有什么能夠抹去它。事實(shí)證明，只要我們不放棄希望就總有辦法擺脫困境

成長改變結(jié)尾句

1.學(xué)習(xí)知識促“改變’

It's never too late to learn. Each individual has the right to accept more challenges and make more attempts.

學(xué)習(xí)永遠(yuǎn)為時不晚。每人都應(yīng)該并且有權(quán)利去接受更多的挑戰(zhàn)，做更多的嘗試。

2.發(fā)揮天賦促“改變”

Actually, each of us possesses a unique talent that we are born with. As long as we are good at discovering it and developing it to the fullest, and also make efforts, we can create miracles in the end.

事實(shí)上,我們每個人都擁有與生俱來的與眾不同的天賦，只要我們善于發(fā)現(xiàn)它并將其發(fā)揮到極致,加上努力,最終你就一定能創(chuàng)造奇跡 。

3.追逐夢想促“改變”

It's never too late to pursue your dream. As long as you seize every opportunity and take full advantage of it, and also make every effort, you are sure to realize your dreams.

追夢永遠(yuǎn)不晚。只要你抓住并充分利用機(jī)會，加上努力，你就一定會實(shí)現(xiàn)夢想。

4.克服困難促“改變”

The journey to success is not smooth. It is full of challenges and hardships. We should be brave to face them. As long as we don't give up hope and make every effort to overcome all the difficulties, we will surely achieve our goal finally.

通往成功的路不會平坦，充滿挑戰(zhàn)和艱辛。我們要勇敢面對。只要不放棄希望并竭盡全力克服所有困難，我們最終會實(shí)現(xiàn)我們的目標(biāo)。

5.戰(zhàn)勝恐懼促“改變”

Determination and optimism are what it takes to conquer your fear,build your confidence and reach your goal.

戰(zhàn)勝恐懼、建立自信和實(shí)現(xiàn)目標(biāo)，需要決心和樂觀。

6.戰(zhàn)勝自卑促“改變”

I smiled as I eventually realized the real source of confidence. Now, I am proud of what I look like, because I have come to realize that it is your personality that decides who you really are.

我笑了，因?yàn)槲易罱K意識到了自信的真正來源。現(xiàn)在，我為我的樣子感到驕傲,因?yàn)槲乙呀?jīng)意識到，決定你真正是誰的是你的個性...

7.戰(zhàn)勝消極促“改變”

Attitude is more important than facts for us. We cannot change our past; we cannot change the fact. However, the only thing we can do is hold a positive attitude.

對我們來說，態(tài)度比事實(shí)更重要。我們不能改變我們的過去，我們不能改變事實(shí)。然而，我們唯一能做的就是保持積極的態(tài)度。

人生哲理

1.1 is never too late to learm.

活到老,學(xué)到老。

2. Constant dropping wears the stone. 

滴水穿石。

3. From small beginnings come great things. 

偉大始于渺小。

4. The world makes way for the dreamer. 

世界總會給有夢想的人開路。

5. Each man is the architect of his own fate.

每個人都是自已命運(yùn)的建筑師。

6. We should enjoy every moment and never escape challenges.

我們應(yīng)該享受每一刻，永遠(yuǎn)不要逃避挑戰(zhàn)。

7. Don't take people's concern for granted. No matter how much they love you, people get tired eventually.

不要把別人的關(guān)心當(dāng)成理所當(dāng)然。不管他們有多愛你,最終也會有疲憊的一天。

8. He was delighted that it helped him realize one requires more patience in any task being accomplished. 

他很高興,這幫助他認(rèn)識到一個人在完成任何任務(wù)時都需要更多的耐心。

9. As long as you have a dream, just go for it, and never give it up easily. Your dream might not come

true in one or two days, but it will someday.

只要你有夢想,就去追求,不要輕易放棄。你的夢想可能不會在一兩天內(nèi)實(shí)現(xiàn),但總有一天會實(shí)現(xiàn)的。