第一部分 語(yǔ)言描寫

一、正確使用標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)

(1)說(shuō)話人+說(shuō)話內(nèi)容

“說(shuō)”后用逗號(hào)， 引號(hào)內(nèi)第一個(gè)字母大寫，句尾標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)放在引號(hào)內(nèi)。

He said,“You are my best friend!”

(2) 說(shuō)話內(nèi)容+說(shuō)話人

陳述句引號(hào)內(nèi)用逗號(hào)， 引號(hào)外第一個(gè)字母小寫：疑問(wèn)句或感嘆句引號(hào)內(nèi)用問(wèn)號(hào)或感嘆號(hào)， 引號(hào)外第一個(gè)字母小寫。且“某人說(shuō)”可以寫作“sb.said”也可以寫作“said sb.”。

① "Yes," he said.

②"You may both go," said Andy.

③"Don't move," she said to Mike in a soft voice.

(3)說(shuō)話內(nèi)容+說(shuō)話人+說(shuō)話內(nèi)容

“某人說(shuō)”可以寫作“sb.said”也可以寫作“said sb.”:

“某人說(shuō)”前面引號(hào)內(nèi)用逗號(hào)，引號(hào)外第一個(gè)字母小寫。

“某人說(shuō)”后面如果用句號(hào)，則后面引號(hào)內(nèi)第一個(gè)字母大寫；

“某人說(shuō)”后面如果用逗號(hào)，則后面引號(hào)內(nèi)第一個(gè)字母小寫。

①“That's cool,”he said.“Can I have a try?”

②“You'd better let me go,”teased her twin brother, William.“There are dangers all over this place.”

③“You can go any place you want,”Amy said,“but I think you'll find what you need.”

二、避免重復(fù)使用 say

在進(jìn)行語(yǔ)言描寫時(shí)很多同學(xué)全部都只用“said”這一個(gè)單詞，這樣使得句子重復(fù)呆板，因此要學(xué)會(huì)靈活多變的各種“說(shuō)”。

explain 解釋

state 陳述

protest 抗議

sob哭訴

insist 堅(jiān)持

comfort安慰

repeat 重復(fù)

agree同意

order命令

scream 尖叫

promise承諾

whisper 耳語(yǔ)

yell/shout 大叫

declare 聲稱

add 補(bǔ)充

assure 保證

complain 抱怨

apologise 道歉

announce 宣告

argue 爭(zhēng)論

interrupt 打斷

beg 請(qǐng)求

demand 要求

mock 嘲諷

claim 聲稱

cry/exclaim 喊叫

suggest/advise 建議

stammer/stutter/stumble 結(jié)巴

ask /inquire 詢問(wèn)

reply/answer/respond回答

1.“Christine !照顧好你弟弟!”母親高聲喊道。

“Christine! Take care of your young brother!”Mother shouted at the top of her voice.

2.“Hannah，你知道她在哪兒?jiǎn)?她怎么樣?請(qǐng)告訴我。”他懇求道。

"Hannah, do you know where she is? How is she? Please tell me."He begged.

3.“報(bào)紙上有一個(gè)圣誕愿望競(jìng)賽。”Amy的媽媽宣布，“給圣誕老人寫封信可能會(huì)得獎(jiǎng)。”

“There's a Christmas wish con test on the newspaper,”Amy's mom announced.“Write a letter to Santa, and you might win a prize.”

三、如何讓對(duì)話更生動(dòng)

第一類

“……,”sb said in a …voice/tone.某人以…的聲音、 語(yǔ)氣說(shuō)到

in a pleasant tone/voice 以一種愉悅的聲音/語(yǔ)氣

in a firm tone/voice以一種堅(jiān)定的聲音/語(yǔ)氣

in a rude tone/voice以一種粗魯?shù)穆曇?語(yǔ)氣

in a sad tone/voice 以一種悲傷的聲音/語(yǔ)氣

也可以用 in a voice/tone of+名詞的搭配

in a tone/voice of surprise 用一種驚訝的語(yǔ)氣

in a tone/voice of curiosity 用一種好奇的語(yǔ)氣

in a tone/voice of impatience 用一種不耐煩的語(yǔ)氣

in a tone/voice of command用一種命令的語(yǔ)氣

1.“你一定是安妮吧?”他用友好的語(yǔ)氣說(shuō)。

“You must be Annie,”he said in a friendly tone.

2.“我很樂(lè)意。”艾米莉用愉快的語(yǔ)氣說(shuō)。

“I would love to.”said Emily in a pleasant tone.

3.“我不想和你一起去。”艾米麗用不耐煩的語(yǔ)氣說(shuō)。

“I don't want to go with you.”said Emily in a tone of impatience.

4.“不，我沒(méi)有告訴他這個(gè)秘密。”他用低沉的語(yǔ)調(diào)說(shuō).

“No, I didn’t tell him the secret.”he said in a low tone.

第二類

“xxx,”sb said in/with+心情類名詞.某人以…的心情說(shuō)道……

1.“You are safe,”Tom cried with excitement.

“你安全啦！”Tom 激動(dòng)地說(shuō)道。

2.“I hate you!”she screamed in anger.

“我討厭你！”她生氣地大喊道。

3.“What a lovely rabbit,”I said in astonishment.

“好可愛的兔子啊！”我詫異地說(shuō)到。

4.“Nice to meet you,”he said with enthusiasm.

“很高興認(rèn)識(shí)你。”他熱情地說(shuō)。

第三類

“xxx,”sb said +adv..+doing.(添加非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞表達(dá)后續(xù)動(dòng)作)

1.“我去給我們拿點(diǎn)咖啡。”她溫柔地說(shuō)道，朝廚房走去。

“I'll get us some coffee,” she said gently, heading for the kitchen.

2.“我再也不相信你了。”他生氣地大喊道，砰的一聲關(guān)上門。

“I don't believe you anymore.”He yelled angrily, slamming the door.

3.“我被狼襲擊了，我以為再也見不到你了。”麥克激動(dòng)地說(shuō)，緊緊抱住他們。

“I was attacked by a wolf and I thought I would never see you again.”Mike said excitedly.hugging them tightly.

第四類

sb did sth.did sth and said“xxx.” (添加動(dòng)作鏈)

1.他攔下出租車， 提著行李箱跳上車， 對(duì)司機(jī)說(shuō)："請(qǐng)去警察局。"

He stopped the taxi, jumped in with the suitcase and told the driver.“Go to the police station,please.”

2.她沖上前去，跪在地上，喃喃地說(shuō)：“對(duì)不起，我的寶貝。”

She dashed forward.knelt down and murmured," I'm sorry, my baby.”

3.我匆忙穿上衣服，拿起包說(shuō)：“請(qǐng)等一下我！”

I put on my clothes hurriedly, grabbed my bag and said."Please wait for me!"

Translation

1.“沒(méi)人能理解我！”安迪哽咽著， 雙手掩面。

“Nobody could understand me!”Andy sobbed, burying his face in his hands.

2.農(nóng)夫抱起狗，跪下來(lái)，輕聲說(shuō)：“現(xiàn)在是你的了。”

The farmer picked up the dog, knelt down and said in a soft voice,“It's yours now.”

3.她眼里噙著淚水說(shuō)：“對(duì)不起。”

With tears in her eves, she said,“Sorry.”

4.“嗨， 蘭迪。我對(duì)意大利面條的事感到抱歉。”凱瑟琳低聲道歉， 臉漲紅了。

“Hi, Landy.I'm sorry about the spaghetti thing.”Catherine murmured an apology, her face reddening.

5.“看！”羅斯指著窗戶，激動(dòng)地喊道。

“Look!”Rose pointed out the window and cried in great excitement.

6.“想試一下嗎?”我撫摸著瑪麗娜的手說(shuō)。

“Want to try one on?”I said, touching Marina's hand.

7.我打開窗戶對(duì)著對(duì)面喊道。“我知道我們以前見過(guò)面， 但我不記得在哪里了。”。

I opened my window and shouted across,“I know we've met before, but I can't remember where.”

8.“想試一下嗎?”我撫摸著瑪麗娜的手說(shuō)。

“Want to try one on?”I said, touching Marina's hand.

第二部分 結(jié)尾升華

一、分類

1、氛圍結(jié)尾:

floated in the air/filled +地點(diǎn)/…was bathed in“飄在空中/充滿/沉浸在”

(1) The golden sun light streaming in, laughter lingered around the yard and happiness floated in the air.

(2) With the cool breeze, the whole family was bathed in happiness and love.

2、擁抱哭泣對(duì)話法

A hugged B tightly with tears flowing down one's cheeks, whispering...

母親給了我們每個(gè)人一個(gè)大大的擁抱，眼淚順著臉頰流下來(lái)，在我們耳邊低語(yǔ)：“謝謝你們的好意。是你的愛溫暖了我們。

The mother hugged us tightly with tears flowing down her cheeks, whispering in our ears,“Thank you for your kindness.It's your love that has warmed us up.”

3.強(qiáng)調(diào)句:

It is+名詞+that+謂語(yǔ)(count/matter/bring...)“正是…”

正是愛和關(guān)懷使世界運(yùn)轉(zhuǎn)。

It is love and care that make the world go around.

4.From then on, “從那時(shí)起, ……”

從那時(shí)起，我總是盡可能地幫助別人。

From then on, I always give others a helping hand if possible.

從那時(shí)起，友誼在我們兩人的心中綻放。

From then on friendship bloomed in both of our hearts.

5.Only then did sb.realize that…“直到那時(shí)某人才意識(shí)到…”

直到那時(shí)我才意識(shí)到，我們不應(yīng)該把愛視為理所當(dāng)然。

Only then did I realized that we should never take love for granted.

6.It occurred to sb.that…“某人突然想到…”

他突然想到，有了家人的愛，過(guò)生日就不再是煩惱了。

It occurred to him that with family's love, it was no longer disturbing to have birthday.

7.Many years have passed, but I will never forget ...“許多年過(guò)去了，但我永遠(yuǎn)不會(huì)忘記…”

許多年過(guò)去了，但我永遠(yuǎn)不會(huì)忘記那份特別的禮物。

Many years have passed, but I will never forget the special gift.

8.Many years have passed, but the experience is still deeply engraved in one's mind.

許多年過(guò)去了，但這段經(jīng)歷仍深深地銘刻在一個(gè)人的腦海里。

9.Never had sb.done sth.“某人從來(lái)沒(méi)有…”

她從來(lái)沒(méi)有這么驕傲過(guò)！

Never had she been so proud!

二、精彩結(jié)尾賞析

親情類

1.The Mother hugged the twins tightly, whispering,“This is the best surprise in the world!”

2.Only then did I realized that how much my mom loved me.

3.It occurred to me that family love is the greatest gift in life.

4.It was at that moment that I had a full understanding of the significance of family.

5.It was at this very moment that the frozen ice between two generations ——melted down into a warm stream flowing into their hearts.

6.The early sunlight streaming in, laughter lingered around the room and happiness floated in the air/the whole family was bathed in happiness and love.

7.After so many years, the taste of the cake, the laughter of friends and the embrace of my parents still lingered in my mind.

= the taste of the cake, the laughter of friends and the embrace of my parents were still deeply engraved in my mind.

8.This birthday is bound to be kept in my memory forever,lightening my future path.

助人類

1.有時(shí)候，我們小小的行動(dòng)可以給別人帶來(lái)很大的不同。

Sometimes our small action can make a great difference to others.

2.許多年過(guò)去了，但我永遠(yuǎn)不會(huì)忘記瑪格麗特的圣誕禮物和她的善舉。

Many years have passed, but I will never forget Margret's Christmas gifts and her act of kindness.

2.母親給了我們每個(gè)人一個(gè)大大的擁抱，在我們的眼中低語(yǔ)：“謝謝你們的好意。是你的愛溫暖了我們。”

The mother gave each of us a big hug, whispering in our eyes,“Thank you for your kindness.It's your love that has warmed us up.”

3.我突然想到，一個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單的舉動(dòng)可以讓世界變得更美好。

It occurred to me that a simple act could make the world so much better.

5.雖然外面的風(fēng)還在呼嘯，但一股暖流涌上心頭。

Although the wind still screamed outside, a warm current rose in my heart.

個(gè)人成長(zhǎng)類(逆境、積極向上)

1.在你身上發(fā)生了什么并不重要，重要的是你如何應(yīng)對(duì)。

It's not what happens to you, but how you react to it that matters.

2.直面困難，努力。你終將制造奇跡。

Be brave, rise to setbacks, and make efforts.You will end up creating miracles.

3.恐懼締造不了未來(lái)，但希望可以。

Fear never builds the future, but hope does.

4.每個(gè)人都像一朵花，有的有香味，有的沒(méi)有。只要你開花，就會(huì)有蜜蜂和蝴蝶。

Everyone is like a flower, some having fragrance, but some not.As long as you bloom, there will be bees and butterflies.

5.要把最壞的情況變成最好的情況，一個(gè)人應(yīng)該采取行動(dòng)。

To change the worst situation into best, one should take actions.

6.正如諺語(yǔ)所說(shuō)，永遠(yuǎn)不會(huì)失敗。我要么贏，要么學(xué)習(xí)。

Just as a saying goes,“Never lose.I either win or learn.”

7.成功之路并不平坦。它充滿了挑戰(zhàn)和困難。

The journey to success is not smooth.It is full of challenges and difficulties.

個(gè)人成長(zhǎng)類(夢(mèng)想)

1.這是真的：如果夢(mèng)想足夠大， 事實(shí)并不重要。

It's true: If the dream is big enough, the facts don't count.

2.任何一個(gè)有夢(mèng)想，有勇氣和毅力的人都會(huì)成功。

Anyone with a dream, courage and persistence will be successful.

3.成為你可能成為的人永遠(yuǎn)都不晚。

Only then did I realized that it's never too late to be all you can possibly be.

4.人類歷史上最偉大的發(fā)現(xiàn)是一個(gè)人可以通過(guò)改變他的態(tài)度來(lái)改變他的未來(lái)。

The greatest discovery of all time is that a person can change his future by merely changing his attitude.

5.你無(wú)法控制他人的行為，但你可以選擇如何應(yīng)對(duì)。

You cannot control the behavior of others, but you can always choose how you respond to it.

脫險(xiǎn)類

1.多么死里逃生??！

What a narrow escape!

2.每當(dāng)我回想起那次驚心動(dòng)魄的經(jīng)歷，我仍然會(huì)感到一種強(qiáng)烈的恐懼感。

I would still feel a strong sense of fear whenever I looked back on the thrilling experience.

3.事實(shí)證明，只要我們保持冷靜，任何困境都是有出路的。

It turned out that there is always a way out of any difficult situations as long as we stay calm.

4.我從來(lái)沒(méi)有陷入過(guò)這樣危險(xiǎn)的境地。這段經(jīng)歷深深地刻在了我的腦海里，提醒我要尊重自然。

Never had I fallen into such a dangerous situation.The experience was deeply engraved in my mind and reminded me to respect the nature.