（四十六）

【原文內(nèi)容】

本文以人物為線索展開，講述了作者在森林中遇到了一只被陷阱困住的母狼，作者給它喂食，在獲得了它的信任后作者放走了母狼，母狼消失在了森林中。

【續(xù)寫范文】

An echo(回聲）came back across the distance. Again I called. This time followed by a wolf call from about a half-mile away. Then，far off，I saw a dark shape moving slowly in my direction. As it approached to me, I could see it was the wolf. An unusual feeling spread through my whole body. I knew at once that familiar shape, even after four years. “Hello, old girl,” I called gently. The wolf got closer, and stopped a few yards off, her tail swayed slightly.

Moments later, the wolf was gone. I left Kupreanof Island a short time after that, and I never saw the animal again. But the memory she left with me—vivid—will always be there, a reminder that there are things in nature that exist outside the laws and understanding of man. We can only accept them and—because they’re with an air of mystery and strangeness—perhaps treasure them all the time. I feel lucky to have an animal friend.

【范文譯文】

一個回聲（回聲）從遠處傳來。我又叫了。這次是半英里外傳來的狼叫。然后，在遠處，我看到一個黑色的人形慢慢向我的方向移動。當(dāng)它接近時 我，我看出來是狼。一種不尋常的感覺傳遍了我的全身。我立刻認出了那個熟悉的形狀，即使是四年后。“你好，老姑娘。”我輕輕地喊道。幾碼外，她的尾巴微微擺動。

片刻之后，狼不見了。在那之后不久，我離開了庫普蘭諾夫島，我再也沒有見過這只動物。但她留給我的記憶——栩栩如生——將永遠存在，提醒人們自然界中有些東西存在于人類的法則和理解之外。我們只能接受它們——因為它們帶著一種神秘和陌生的氣息——也許一直珍惜它們。我覺得很幸運有一個動物朋友。

（四十七）

【原文內(nèi)容】

本文以人物為線索展開，講述了作者是一名攝影師，在市中心經(jīng)營一家工作室，生意火爆，顧客不預(yù)約，就不接受其攝影訂單。一天，一個媽媽帶著生病的女兒來到作者店里，想要作者給女兒拍一張有獨角獸的照片。雖然媽媽沒預(yù)約，但作者答應(yīng)給小女孩拍照片。

【續(xù)寫范文】

I locked the front door and invited them to the changing room. I spent the next three hours taking photos of this kid in every princess costume I have in my closet. She was the sweetest, most well-behaved kid I had ever worked with. Once we were done, she lay on the couch in my office and fell asleep while I loaded up the photos for her mum to see and choose the ones she liked best.

The other thanked me over and over and came up front, holding out her credit card. I refused to accept it, say: “I feel very honored to take a photo of such a lovely angel. I’m not taking money for this, but I hope you can allow me to put one of her photos in our showcase, because she has the most beautiful and warmest smile. Many years later that photo of a sick little girl on a giant pink unicorn is still in a frame in my shop, always reminding me to show kindness to those who really need it.

【范文譯文】

我鎖上前門，邀請他們到更衣室。在接下來的三個小時里，我穿著衣櫥里的每一件公主裝都在給這個孩子拍照。她是我共事過的最可愛、最乖巧的孩子。完成后，她躺在我辦公室的沙發(fā)上睡著了，而我把照片上傳給她媽媽，讓她看看并選擇她最喜歡的照片。

另一個人一遍又一遍地感謝我，然后走到前面，拿出她的信用卡。我不服，說：“能拍到這么可愛的天使，我感到很榮幸。我不是為此收錢，但我希望你能允許我把她的一張照片放在我們的展示柜里，因為她的笑容是最美麗最溫暖的。多年后，我店里的相框里還掛著一張生病的小女孩騎著巨大的粉紅色獨角獸的照片，時刻提醒著我要善待那些真正需要它的人。

（四十八）

【原文內(nèi)容】

本篇書面表達是讀后續(xù)寫。通過閱讀所給文章可知，作者認為女孩最重要的品質(zhì)是勇敢，但是說起來容易做起來難，作者被電視上播放的關(guān)于蛇的節(jié)目嚇得離電視很遠，但女兒卻不怕，今年作者去新加坡學(xué)習(xí)，丈夫帶著女兒來看她，一家人去濱海灣公園玩，女兒想玩懸索橋的航線，作者卻不敢玩，但是她真的會拒絕女兒嗎？

【續(xù)寫范文1】

My daughter was waiting for my reply. I was secretly very worried. But my daughter kept begging me and I could not bear to reject her. Bravery was the most significant quality that I wanted her to possess. Her curiosity was so strong that I couldn’t resist. I nodded slightly, and my daughter’s frowning face slowly broke into a smile. My response surprised my husband, who reacted with the wildest excitement as we walked towards the Skyway. When I stepped on it, I found myself horrified by the height. I grabbed the railing, almost unable to move.

Halfway across the bridge, I had to stop. My heart beat wildly, casting scared glances down the bridge. My husband and daughter held my hands tightly. I walked as though I were drunk. But their firm gaze built up my confidence and we kept going together. “Mom, look, it’s so beautiful.” What I saw there filled my soul with joy. The bay spread out far below me. Beyond it stood the tall and beautiful skyscrapers. I looked down at my little girl who taught her mother how to be brave, and breathed a sigh of relief.

【范文譯文】

我的女兒正在等待我的答復(fù)。我暗暗很擔(dān)心。但是我女兒一直在求我，我不忍拒絕她。勇敢是我希望她擁有的最重要的品質(zhì)。她的好奇心如此強烈，我無法抗拒。我微微點頭，女兒皺著眉頭的臉上慢慢地笑了起來。我的反應(yīng)讓我的丈夫感到驚訝，當(dāng)我們走向 Skyway 時，他的反應(yīng)非常激動。當(dāng)我踩到它時，我發(fā)現(xiàn)自己被高度嚇壞了。我抓住欄桿，幾乎動彈不得。

過了橋一半，我不得不停下來。我的心狂跳不止，驚恐地望著橋下。我的丈夫和女兒緊緊地握著我的手。我像喝醉了一樣走路。但他們堅定的目光建立了我的信心，我們一直在一起。“媽媽，你看，好漂亮。”我在那里看到的一切讓我的靈魂充滿了喜悅。海灣在我下方很遠的地方展開。遠處矗立著高大而美麗的摩天大樓。我低頭看著教媽媽勇敢的小女孩，松了口氣。

【續(xù)寫范文2】

My daughter was waiting for my reply. I looked at her, then at the Skyway. I felt my heart threatening to burst out from my chest. My husband, who was used to this kind of situation and understood how scared I was, consoled me. He said he could go with our little girl instead. But my daughter wouldn’t give up easily and shouted out her own encouragement. I plucked up my courage and took my first step onto the suspension bridge, then another, I inched forward, all the way holding on tight to the handrail.

Halfway across the bridge, I had to stop. I stood there, and my legs trembled despite my fruitless attempt to stay calm. Below the bridge, the treetops formed an ocean of green waves that threatened to devour me. Just then, I heard a familiar voice, and two little hands slipped into my arm. Looking down, I saw my little angel’s bright smile, encouraging me to finish the walk. Eventually, we reached the end together. My husband was surprised at my nerve, but I knew the reason I had felt so brave was for my little girl.

【范文譯文】

我的女兒正在等待我的答復(fù)。我看了看她，然后看了看Skyway。我感覺我的心臟快要從胸膛里跳出來了。習(xí)慣了這種情況，明白我有多害怕的丈夫安慰了我。他說他可以和我們的小女孩一起去。但女兒不會輕易放棄，大聲鼓勵自己。我鼓起勇氣，邁出第一步走上吊橋，然后又邁出一步，我一步步向前，一直緊緊抓住扶手。

過了橋一半，我不得不停下來。我站在那里，盡管我試圖保持冷靜，但我的雙腿顫抖著。橋下，樹梢形成了一片綠色的波浪海洋，威脅要吞噬我。就在這時，我聽到一個熟悉的聲音，兩只小手滑進了我的懷里。低頭，我看到我的小天使?fàn)N爛的笑容，鼓勵我完成步行。最終，我們一起走到了盡頭。我的丈夫?qū)ξ业哪懥扛械襟@訝，但我知道我感到如此勇敢的原因是為了我的小女兒。

（四十九）

【原文內(nèi)容】

本文以人物為線索展開，講述了作者在游泳比賽上認識了Ken，說服了作者的父母讓作者去加利福尼亞訓(xùn)練一年。他甚至幫作者找了個寄宿家庭。作者一開始還很擔(dān)憂，但是后來和寄宿家庭相處很愉快，游泳成績逐步提高了。作者從他們身上學(xué)到了慷慨、愛和善良。

【續(xù)寫范文】

Alone on the long flight to Los Angeles, I was filled with doubts, as I had never lived with a strange family. How would I manage to live with people I had never met before? What if the host family I didn't get along? Would I fit in? I needn't have worried. From the first moment at the airport where they had come to receive me, I knew things would be all right. Their smiles and their words of welcome as they greeted me felt like a warm embrace. I could not have found a kinder, more generous family than theirs.

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The kindness of the host family and Ken gave me all the practical and emotional support I needed to train in a swimming club of California. During my stay there, it was the mother of my host family who drove me to and from the training center every day. She could cook delicious food and she knew how to comfort me while I was homesick. The training was hard, yet it was Ken who always showed me concern and encouraged me to keep going. My swimming performance improved slowly but steadily. From those kind people I have learned generosity, love, and kindness.

【范文譯文】

獨自一人在飛往洛杉磯的長途航班上，我充滿了疑惑，因為我從來沒有和一個陌生的家庭住在一起。我將如何設(shè)法與我從未見過的人一起生活？如果寄宿家庭我不相處怎么辦？我適合嗎？我不必擔(dān)心。從他們來機場接我的第一刻起，我就知道一切都會好起來的。當(dāng)他們向我打招呼時，他們的微笑和歡迎詞感覺就像一個溫暖的擁抱。我找不到比他們更友善、更慷慨的家庭了。

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寄宿家庭和肯的好意給了我在加利福尼亞游泳俱樂部訓(xùn)練所需的所有實際和情感支持。在我逗留期間，每天接送我往返培訓(xùn)中心的都是寄宿家庭的母親。她會做美味的食物，而且她知道在我想家時如何安慰我。訓(xùn)練很辛苦，但肯總是關(guān)心我，鼓勵我繼續(xù)前進。我的游泳成績緩慢而穩(wěn)定地提高。從那些善良的人身上，我學(xué)到了慷慨、愛心和善良。

（五十）

【原文內(nèi)容】

本文以人物為線索展開，講述了Ricky總是被人嘲笑，在年鑒日上不自信怕沒人為他簽名，他緊張的問作者能否在他的年鑒上簽名，作者原本因為他的外貌不想答應(yīng)，但最后還是答應(yīng)了，然后在作者的同意下，他也在作者的年鑒上簽了名。

【續(xù)寫范文】

Ricky handed me  my yearbook and smiled really happy. I couldn’t help but smile back at him. Just at that moment, my mood changed completely. I had never expected to have any connection with a boy like him but felt something warm and touching in his smile. I gave him a huge hug. Suddenly everyone at my table wanted his signature. Soon, many people in the hall asked Ricky to sign in their yearbooks. His yearbook wasn't going unsigned, either. "You're cool, Ricky! " "Have a wonderful summer, Ricky! "and the like filled up the signature pages of his yearbook.

It was amazing, and Ricky was excited. His smile was so big that it lit up the hall. That's when I saw his special helper standing not very far away from the table. She was drying tears from her eyes and smiling. She looked at me and mouthed the words, “Thank you. ” I nodded to her, looked at Ricky and spoke softly, “Thank you, too. ” Honestly, I had never realised before that a small action could make such a difference. It was Ricky who taught me that.

【范文譯文】

瑞奇把我的年鑒遞給我，笑得很開心。我忍不住對他笑了笑。就在這時，我的心情徹底變了。我從沒想過會和他這樣的男孩有任何聯(lián)系，但在他的微笑中感到溫暖和感人。我給了他一個大大的擁抱。突然間，我桌上的每個人都想要他的簽名。很快，大廳里的許多人要求瑞奇在他們的年鑒上簽名。他的年鑒也不會不署名。“你很酷，Ricky！” “有一個美好的夏天，Ricky！”諸如此類的東西填滿了他年鑒的簽名頁。

這太棒了，瑞奇很興奮。他的笑容那么燦爛，照亮了整個大廳。就在這時，我看到他的特別助手站在離桌子不遠的地方。她擦干眼角的淚水，微笑著。她看著我，嘴里說：“謝謝。” 我對她點點頭，看著瑞奇，輕聲說道，“也謝謝你。” 老實說，我以前從未意識到，一個小動作就能產(chǎn)生如此大的影響。是瑞奇教我的。